Personal response to my animation
I like my idea and this the sound effects fit well with the movement. I think it runs smoothly and is fun to watch. I think I worked on making the sparks progress to get increasingly bigger. I would of liked to add more it to improve and make it more interesting as it is quite simple at the moment. I thought that it fit well with my personality as I enjoy bright colors.
Feedback
I set up a padlet, uploaded my animation to that and sent the link to my classmates, asking them what they thought was good about the animation and what needed improving.
This is my padlet: http://padlet.com/pennydee_eastbu/xv52w8hk6xjq
From the feedback I recieved I found out that people like the "use of colours" and that it "made it appealing". They liked the idea of "having the lines colliding and creating fireworks". Most people thought that it was a very happy little piece of animation and it "flows really nice."
There are mixed feelings about the sound effects as some thought the sound effects "worked well with the animation" and some thought I could of found better sound effects. From this I can deduce that this is more a matter of a opinion but could still be improved if need be.
A couple of people mentioned that the font in the titles was difficult to read, therefor I would use a different font if I were to do this again.
Someone mentioned the interlude in the middle didn't really fit with the piece as "it looks a tiny bit miss-formed". So if I were to change it I would replace that with something else, perhaps something more relevant to the piece.
This is my padlet: http://padlet.com/pennydee_eastbu/xv52w8hk6xjq
From the feedback I recieved I found out that people like the "use of colours" and that it "made it appealing". They liked the idea of "having the lines colliding and creating fireworks". Most people thought that it was a very happy little piece of animation and it "flows really nice."
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| The Fireworks with bright colours throughout the animation. |
A couple of people mentioned that the font in the titles was difficult to read, therefor I would use a different font if I were to do this again.
Someone mentioned the interlude in the middle didn't really fit with the piece as "it looks a tiny bit miss-formed". So if I were to change it I would replace that with something else, perhaps something more relevant to the piece.
To improve
From my feedback I learned that if I wanted to go back and change my piece, which I may do in future, I should change the font to make it easier to read. I should also add more it such as a dark background to make the colors stand out and also change the morphing shape in the middle to something more relevant. I may make it slightly longer and have a bit more going on.
